There were quite a few issues with Neversong's story, and it bothered me so much that I decided to rewrite it better!

*Spoiler alert, for anybody who hasn't played it

The game beings with a scene of a car being driven by an unknown person(it is later revealed that it's Peet driving, with Wren in the passenger seat) loosing control and the falling down a hill, and then the sound of a heart rate monitor…

The next scene is Peet as a kid in the town where the game is set playing with Wren, when Dr Smile picks her up and runs off with her, you(Peet) chase after him to save Wren…

While chasing him you come across a abusive teacher of yours, they block the path, and a boss fight with them begins, you defeat them, and they shed their skin, and apologises for their abuse, and then you tell them that the blame is partially on you also, and apologize too for your anger towards them, and then you get back 1 of your and Wren's song's that you forgot(symbolising a part of your innocence/connection with Wren returning)…

Then you come across a foster carer who neglected you, the same thing happens, you defeat them, they shed skin, then they say they will care for you properly from now on, and you tell them that you haven't been caring for yourself either, instead turning to vices, and that from now on you will begin to look after yourself too, then you get another song back…

Then a 3rd boss shows up, some other authority figure who taught you that money = happiness, again, you beat them and they shed their skin, then they denounce their philosophy and apologize, you tell them that it was ultimately you who let greed corrupt you life, then you get another song…

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Inbetween all this is happening you get the phone calls from adult Wren, telling you about all your flaws and how they are ruining you relationship with her…

You go in the assylum, and see Dr Smile take Wren through a door and lock it behind him, so you look for a way in there…

And come across all the kids from town, who are all adults now, and are telling you that the doctor, who they say looked just like you when he was a boy, who's supposed to be helping them has been mistreating them due to all his problems, and that they need your help before they can help you get through the door…

And so you help the kids(who are adults now) by doing what their doctor should have been doing, and then they help you get though the door to where Dr Smile and Wren are…

Dr Smile makes reference to the fact that he's the kids doctor, before you begin the fight with him, and then defeat him, and then watch him shed his skin, and realise that he is you…

Then the scene changes, to before the car crash at the beginning of the game, and you see that it's you driving, and you're shouting at Wren in the passenger seat, lieing that you only had two drinks (which is clearly a lie) and that you where only drinking to begin with because you where at a meeting with business associates about part ownership in a new business (to which she replies, that she's told you a million times you already work to much and that they don't need any more money), then you loose control of the car, and the crash happenes…

Then you wake up in a hospital bed (AS AN ADULT!), not long after Wren arrives, and you are somewhat suprised that she showed up…

She's in a wheelchair, she's happy you're awake, but she's not happy about what you had become before the crash, or the fact that she is now in a wheelchair for the rest of her life, and she's not sure if she can continue the relaionship…

But the game ends with you beginning to patch your relationship up with her, and your patients, and the world, showing them that you have truly changed, and are now on the straight and narrow.

End.

Also, at the part where you pop the inflated guy, he actually pops!