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MAN vs. MACHINE

Started by Cypher Ae Sep 9, 2003 at 5:02 AM 11 replies 450+ views
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Cypher Ae
Cypher Ae
Read this script I just thought of walking home. It''s a good idea, and it could be cool. Mechanic Black screen Fade In: Bedroom. Int. Day. A digital alarm clocks numbers glow with radiance. Hitting the stroke of 9:18 music kicks in. The man in the bed rises from his slumber to throw a clumsy hand over the snooze button. Cut To: Driveway. Ext. Day The headlight of a sedan flashes briefly as the engine sputters then dies. After many failed attempts, the engine kicks into life the car lurches forward. Cut To: Kitchen. Int. Day. The man turns the kettle on and turns to the fridge. Opening it, he finds the milk and begins to pour it into a black mug, only for a drop to come out. Cut To: Road. Ext. Day. Driving along, the cars fuel indicator drops low. An eye is cast over this. Cut To: Supermarket. Int. Day. In the supermarket in the cold air of the fridge section, the man takes a carton of milk from the shelf and paces over to the register. Cashier: How are you today? Man: Fine. Cashier: Ok, that’s a dollar sixty. Man: Thanks. Cut To: Petrol Station. Ext. Day. The sleek sedan pulls into the petrol station and parks in front of a fuel pump. The card is swiped and the driver fills up the car. Cut To: Front of House. Ext. Day. The man rushes down the stairs only to trip and stumble down them. Cut To: Roadside. Ext. Day. The sedan is parked on the side of the road, hazard lights glowing as the driver works under the shade of the bonnet. Cut To: Front of House. Ext. Day. Brushing himself, the man awkwardly rises to his feet and lurches off. Cut To: Roadside. Ext. Day. The driver gets in the car, and drives away in working car. Cut To: Footpath. Ext. Day. The man walks briskly along the footpath. Cut To: Road. Ext. Day. The car speeds along the unpopulated road. Cut To: Road. Ext. Day. The man pulls out a cigarette and crosses the road, looking down as he attempt to light it. Cut To: Road. Ext. Day. The car rushes towards the camera. The man turns as he hears the cars engine. With a thud and a screech the man is knocked down. On the ground, the cigarette is still lit as the driver attends to the dead man in the background. Written by Kyle Evans 2003-09-09 See, smoking kills.
liquidAir
liquidAir
Um.. what does the topic have to do with the story? Because I simply don't get it...


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EDIT: typo

[edited by - liquidAir on September 9, 2003 6:07:48 AM]
nes8bit
nes8bit
I have a better idea

Monkey vs. Robot

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Cypher Ae
Cypher Ae
quote:
Original post by liquidAir
Um.. what does the topic have to do with the story? Because I simply don''t get it...



Topic? Oh, do you mean the title: Mechanic.

It''s meaning the fusion of man and machine in their similarities. Sure a mechanic is a person, but they have a lot involvment with cars.
novadragoon
novadragoon
quote:
Original post by nes8bit
I have a better idea

Monkey vs. Robot

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thats a little unfair.. better give that robot a knife
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Zorodius
Zorodius
quote:
Original post by Voice Of Tango
Shooting blanks, novadragoon?

That''s the most hilarious thing I''ve read in your post!
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monkey8751
monkey8751
quote:
Original post by nes8bit
I have a better idea

Monkey vs. Robot



I would so win.
Zul
Zul
Uh, did this not make sense to anyone else? It was NOT SMOKING that killed in this instance. The smoker was walking in the crosswalk with the "walk" light turned on. The driver broke the law, committed vehicular manslaughter, and now will spend 10-15 years in jail.

So ha!
oh hai
Nypyren
Nypyren
My roommate reminded me with ineffable wisdom:

"Monkey hate technology. Robot hate the monkey. Monkey versus Robot."
Cypher Ae
Cypher Ae
quote:
Original post by Zul
Uh, did this not make sense to anyone else? It was NOT SMOKING that killed in this instance. The smoker was walking in the crosswalk with the "walk" light turned on. The driver broke the law, committed vehicular manslaughter, and now will spend 10-15 years in jail.

So ha!


It's one of those scripts that needs to be made to be understood. It's not about the cigarette. It's just a joke. The real focus is the comparison between the mans life, and the cars life. That's why you never really find out about who the driver is because it doesn't matter. Notice how I never indicated the gender or anything about the driver.

EDIT: The man didn't cross at a crossing. He just crossed the road without looking, and thats that point the two 'lives' meet. It's about how much we intertwine with machines, and whether that's a good thing or not. Whether it is or isn't, is your choice however.

[edited by - Cypher Ae on September 10, 2003 2:54:11 AM]
nes8bit
nes8bit
quote:
Original post by Voice Of Tango
Shooting blanks, novadragoon?


good work

*applauds politely*



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