Original Post
Read this script I just thought of walking home. It''s a good idea, and it could be cool.
Mechanic
Black screen
Fade In:
Bedroom. Int. Day.
A digital alarm clocks numbers glow with radiance. Hitting the stroke of 9:18 music kicks in. The man in the bed rises from his slumber to throw a clumsy hand over the snooze button.
Cut To:
Driveway. Ext. Day
The headlight of a sedan flashes briefly as the engine sputters then dies. After many failed attempts, the engine kicks into life the car lurches forward.
Cut To:
Kitchen. Int. Day.
The man turns the kettle on and turns to the fridge. Opening it, he finds the milk and begins to pour it into a black mug, only for a drop to come out.
Cut To:
Road. Ext. Day.
Driving along, the cars fuel indicator drops low. An eye is cast over this.
Cut To:
Supermarket. Int. Day.
In the supermarket in the cold air of the fridge section, the man takes a carton of milk from the shelf and paces over to the register.
Cashier:
How are you today?
Man:
Fine.
Cashier:
Ok, that’s a dollar sixty.
Man:
Thanks.
Cut To:
Petrol Station. Ext. Day.
The sleek sedan pulls into the petrol station and parks in front of a fuel pump. The card is swiped and the driver fills up the car.
Cut To:
Front of House. Ext. Day.
The man rushes down the stairs only to trip and stumble down them.
Cut To:
Roadside. Ext. Day.
The sedan is parked on the side of the road, hazard lights glowing as the driver works under the shade of the bonnet.
Cut To:
Front of House. Ext. Day.
Brushing himself, the man awkwardly rises to his feet and lurches off.
Cut To:
Roadside. Ext. Day.
The driver gets in the car, and drives away in working car.
Cut To:
Footpath. Ext. Day.
The man walks briskly along the footpath.
Cut To:
Road. Ext. Day.
The car speeds along the unpopulated road.
Cut To:
Road. Ext. Day.
The man pulls out a cigarette and crosses the road, looking down as he attempt to light it.
Cut To:
Road. Ext. Day.
The car rushes towards the camera. The man turns as he hears the cars engine. With a thud and a screech the man is knocked down. On the ground, the cigarette is still lit as the driver attends to the dead man in the background.
Written by Kyle Evans
2003-09-09
See, smoking kills.