A bit of storyline, Criticise as you see fit.
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hey mate!as previously written your paragraph and sentence structure needs a bit of cleaning up, however the storyline or the beginnings of one is pretty sweet!do you plan…
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Extreem Critique Requested- Storyline Intro
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Hello everyone here at Gamedev.net, As im new here and this is my first post- i urge you not to hold back on your critique ;) Ok. So below you will see posted the Intro to…
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hello there,good questions! as you may have noticed the main charecter picture doesent quite match up with the description- this is because the charecter was designed as an amme…
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Extreem Critique Requested- Storyline Intro
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See all in Discussionshey mate!as previously written your paragraph and sentence structure needs a bit of cleaning up, however the storyline or the …
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hello there,good questions! as you may have noticed the main charecter picture doesent quite match up with the description- this …
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Programmermattc,thank you for taking the time to read through the intro =)im glad you enjoyed it!just to help clarify a …
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