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Hamlet Essay

Started by Jakarta Apr 15, 2004 at 8:35 PM 4 replies 300+ views
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Jakarta
Jakarta
I have to hand in an essay about injustice in Hamlet and it would be great if you guys looked over it and suggested changes and corrections and better wording etc. it's here [edited by - jakarta on April 15, 2004 9:49:53 PM]
Tron3k
Tron3k
"ones" should be "one''s"

"including that" should be "including those"

"Hamlets" should be "Hamlet''s"

"death," should be "death -"

"decides" should be "decides,"
“[The clergy] believe that any portion of power confided to me, will be exerted in opposition to their schemes. And they believe rightly: for I have sworn upon the altar of God, eternal hostility against every form of tyranny over the mind of man” - Thomas Jefferson
Jakarta
Jakarta
quote:
Original post by Tron3k
"ones" should be "one's"

"including that" should be "including those"

"Hamlets" should be "Hamlet's"

"death," should be "death -"

"decides" should be "decides,"


I agree with all of those. Now that you mention your third correction I really dont know if I should use "-" at all. Maybe I should have just used commas. what do you think?


Thank you very much and keep the corrections coming.

BTW I uploaded the changes.

[edited by - jakarta on April 15, 2004 10:28:54 PM]
Tron3k
Tron3k
Yeah, I was kinda thinking that too. The hyphen is a little awkward in that case.
“[The clergy] believe that any portion of power confided to me, will be exerted in opposition to their schemes. And they believe rightly: for I have sworn upon the altar of God, eternal hostility against every form of tyranny over the mind of man” - Thomas Jefferson
Jakarta
Jakarta
BUMP - common I need some help.
Jakarta
Jakarta
double bumps arent good. This is my last try.

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