*Spent only 5min in total* *I will add more later* http://img131.imageshack.us/img131/6503/pic13xf.jpg http://img260.imageshack.us/img260/9792/pic20ir.jpg Please give me feedback on what you think. ===edit=== I intended to do these pictures so see how good I am in drawing...I can do 10x better but I need to know what do draw exactly in a huge group... ========== **Images wont be shown like this so...sorry** [Edited by - mehrdadr on January 20, 2007 11:01:14 AM]

Hi mehrdadr,

What do you intend to use the images for? Let us know and we can give you better, relevant feedback. Thanks! :)

I'm going to move you to Visual Arts, I think you'll probably get better feedback on this there.

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Original post by mehrdadr *Spent only 5min in total* *I will add more later* Please give me feedback on what you think. ===edit=== I intended to do these pictures so see how good I am in drawing...I can do 10x better but I need to know what do draw exactly in a huge group... ========== **Images wont be shown like this so...sorry**

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what i don't understand is why you show us images you only spent "5min in total". reason being is that what you show is a good start but is unfinished. although this depends grealty on what style you're going for. if you're going for simple cartoony looks thne you're mostly finshed, but you could probably add a lot more tiny details. when drawing don't be afriad to use different color outlining, don't be afriad to also use lines of different thickness. generally thicker lines are used for outlinign an object and thinner ones for tinier details inside.
if you don't want any outlines, then you need to define your barriars where the outline would be better. like on the tree, have it get even darker as it goes down to the lower branch.
if this isn't the advice you wanted then you need to be more clear.

[Edited by - Jarrod1937 on January 20, 2007 4:28:12 PM]

to be more clear, use the <*img src="http://www.gogss.com/example.jpg"*> without the *'s of course.