Great stuff, I'm glad you're going to become a part of our small community, Chase!
Like you said, I enjoyed the amount of variety in your songs. There was a new experience in each one. Here are some of my notes:
- I think the aspect you should work on most is dynamics. Control the volume automation and velocity of each instrument over time in the song and your songs will go from okay to professional.
- Try expanding the stereo width by adjusting panning. Songs like "Vertigo" and "Onward" are too mono for me. Take a look at a random song you like and see which instruments are panned where. Using panning creates excitement in the listener's ear. In conclusion, you should make an effort to create as much stereo width as possible.
- Your piano tracks such as "I Opened My Eyes" and "The Edge" seemed to be drawn in a piano roll. I recommend recording your self playing to get a human performance. Even if you are not a great piano player, you can also adjust things later.
I think my favorite is "Snowdrop". You presented your message without letting too much stuff get in the way.
I wish you good fortune on your path to become a composer!